accomplishedI don't know if this incarnation is any good, but it's hugely better than the old one.
I'd appreciate any comments, especially constructive criticism about content or style. I've already fixed 5 or 6 awkward phrasings. I'm sure there are more - I'm at the point right now where it all looks like a mass of words.
Now I need to try to focus on putting together a good Craigslist ad, and also little phrases for Google Adwords.
Why the hell is getting work more of an effort than the work itself?
